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Improving boring sentences

Posted by on 08/10/2012

Can you improve this boring sentence?
Remember you can improve sentences with:-
adjectives
better words
adding more detail at the beginning or end

Charlie was hungry.

4 Responses to Improving boring sentences

  1. Hunt21

    Well done Josh! You have used a connective! Can anyone add any adjectives?

  2. Josh H

    Charlie Bucket was hungry because he hadn’t eatn for days and weeks.

  3. Josh H

    Charlie was hungry because he hadn’t eatn for days and weeks.

  4. kelton c 3JH

    beautiful charlie was very hungry

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